Username: Rosytears. It has a very sweet sound to it, and invokes a mixture of color and emotion. I like it. (5/5)

Title: Stumble into my world.. And find me. I like the title as well, and is in my oppinion creative. The only problem that I've had is that it doesnt seem to relate much to your username and layout. Dont change it though. (4/5)

First sight: Pink and butterflyish, that goes with your username. I expected something slightly childish from the layout, and the username. I'll go into that later, but for now.. it didnt scare me away. I wasnt exactly captivated though. (7/10)

Your sacrifice: WOW... barely any skips, and you have some that have 6 entries a day! You're a monster! lol. IF anything deserves more than the 8 points, it is definately this diary. (12/8)

Sparkling Diamond: The layout comes from app-designs and seems to give an innocent feel to it. Like I said before, it almost seems childlike. The scroll button is simplistic and works quite well. I LOVE the entire thing you've done with text flipping back and forth. It is definately original and works here quite well. (23/25)

Guestbook: none. Not necessarily a bad thing.. but you could at least link to your notes page. (0/2)

Readibility: Perfect. (5/5)

The love: Wow... Excelent First entry. You've now got me wondering what happened to that friend of yours. Being a sentimental guy, and reading something like this actually let me empatheticly feel those emotions that you conveyed extremely well. You jumped right into the diary after explaining why you started it. You're off to a good start.

You convey emotions very well in your entries. I like the style of going about like a weblog, but inserting alot of history and future thoughts into it, along with a shaken mix of emotions. It makes for a very sweet and pleasant cocktail. It also contrasts the childlike theme, as you seem to be a good writer.

The entries I dont like, however, are the entries that are just songs with a little explanation at the end. This is a good example. Mind you, I love the song. In fact, that song was the same song that someone I once loved and I picked as "our song". All the same, I would have at least liked a little more depth from you. This is YOUR diary, remember that.

This entry got me to think. Honestly, I hate my dad. He was a jerk. My mother is alot more acecpting, and nice, though she has her bad days too. I appreciate them for bringing me into the world, but that does not mean that they deserve divine respect. Respect must be earned.. my mother has earned a good bit of respect. My father earns none. Also... sadly enough, life isnt always like the movies. You cant alwayas chose a choice that accomidates both friends and family..

I know what it's like to live in a Disfunctional Family and you conveyed it quite well. I too search for love from other sources, because my family cannot accomidate it very well. The similarities between our two families are striking. All the same, the writing here was very nice.

In your early entries, you seem to always hate yourself. I'm doing this review as I go along, mind you, so I'm not sure if this will change. I dont see why you'd hate yourself though. You write well and seem to be a nice individual, with friends that do care about you. I'm just saying that you probably shouldnt hate yourself as much as you seem to.

This entry, though short, did leave an impression of me. It seems that you want to forget about your past and move on to a better life. I know how you feel, and if you ever read my diary, you'd see that I've done the same recently, minus deleting old entries. I do hope this has been helping you well. Moving on is never an easy thing to do, but sometimes necessary.

This entry was truely amazing. You were so descriptive and included so much emotion that the weblog style of it was barely even noticable. I can truely relate to your feelings, from wanting to escape into an internet personality, all the way to wishing you could get back at people. I know how it feels. Very excelent writing. Also, if you ever need someone to talk to, I'm always available. I did not fail to notice the depression and suicidal tendancies here... so I'm always open to talk :).

This entry was very easy for me to relate to, merely because I've thought the same thoughts that you are thinking in this issue. I've gone through much similar to this. You describe your emotions well.

All in all, your writings were very interesting. You're a good writer, and you need to give yourself more credit for that. I didnt like the entries that were just songs with small explanations, but you made up for those with many, many other entries of pure emotion that made me feel as if you were close and I knew you personaly. (45/50)

Grammar: Very small grammar problems. I dont expect you to spell check every entry. Your word choice could use a little more, but the words you used were quite fitting and you weaved them together like an art. (9/10)

Glitter: Cast- 2 points, reviews and a website -2 points, links -1 point. You dont have many extras. (5/15)

extra credit: 2 for excelent writing. 1 for including alot of originality. (3/5)

Lasting impression: Of course. You really allowed me to connect to someone who feels the same emotions, even if they are a little more intense than my own. (10/10)

Will I come back?: Sure.. every so often, you can be sure of it. Not daily though. (7/10)

Total: 137/160. That's a solid B ;). Update: sorry, had trouble finding the guestbook. I guess it sort of makes sense in the contact page... though it might work better in the extras. All the same, I'll give you a 2/2. It's there.

Number of entries read: Most all of them, with a few skips.

Favorite entry: I could relate too well to this entry. It was only because I've gone through very similar things.

Favorite quote: Love is simply wonderful. It exists is so many forms. But the real love that gets me on is couple love, sibling love, and friendship love. That's the love that truly matters. And once you've found these three kinds of love, your life is already perfect.

Reviewed by: Anthony