Username: Sweetepy302 just doesnt have a good ring to it. It doesnt say much about you.. I can understand the sweety pie connection, but the 302 just kind of butchers it. (x/5)

Title: Okay... the title doesnt say much about you, honestly. It isnt magnificent, and it isnt very "title-ey" if you will. I dont know what turns me off about the title, but it doesnt make it terrible.. just seems average. I've seen much worse.(3/5)

First Sight: I loved the picture at first sight. It looks so sentimental and beautiful.. but.. I went to scroll down and asked, "where's the scroll button? Hell, where's the down arrow?" I dont know... the blending of colors doesnt seem all that great. (5/10)

Your Sacrifice: You have many skips.. but, you have many doubles as well. I cant excuse those huge 10-15 day skips though(4/8)

Sparkling Diamond: I've seen much better layouts. I've also seen much worse. What I really hate about this layout lies in two things. One, the need to scroll down alot. It just puts me off a bit, I'm rather partial to diaries that fit on one screen with internal scrollers. Two, the scroll button itself is near invisable, as well as the buttons. (12/25)

Guestbook: It's there. Doesnt match your color schematic though. (1/2)

Readability: Perfect, as usual. (5/5)

The Love: Er. Weirdest first entry I've ever seen. It says nothing whatsoever about you, nor what your diary will be about, nor does it give an introduction. But, I will give the reading a chance to see how well you evolve over the course of these months that you've written this diary.

This entry was like sweet and sour sauce. I LOVED the entry but hated the paragraphing. If I see more of this, I'll have to dock points in the love.. but if I dont see alot.. I'll save the docking for the grammar section. But about the content here, it is excelent. It really sounds like my own life. I am in love with someone who'se already taken, and I really know how it feels. I also know equally how it feels to have one special person brighten your day every time they just say "Hello". So in spite of the bad paragraphing, you've done good in opening a great connection early on. Oh, by the way, I'm a self-admited hopeless romantic myself.

These entries are slightly annoying. I see them in many diaries. I'm fine with posting songs and the like in your diary, but dont just post them with barely anything. Saying that you can relate to a song works, but go into depth about HOW you can relate. Back to back, these are not very fun to read.

The diary progresses on, and as I read the entries, I read the usual teenage romance. What I like about your writing style, however, is that you do include emotions in it. It, in my oppinion, conveys your thoughts rather nicely. I'm sorry things so far havent been working out with Dan. I think that you should be less vigerous in your search for love and allow it to come to you. Then agian.. if you find someone naturally that you love, go ahead, go for it. Love's one of the best things in this world.

As for this entry, I've had my own mother attempt to talk to me about alcohol and tobbaco. However, only once... She knows that I'm probably more against tobbaco use than her. Alcohol, on the other hand, I believe can be a good experience in careful moderation. Just dont go driving with it.. heh.

This entry was nice. I'm glad that you managaed to indeed get romantic physical contact. It's a great feeling, I know. One I myself search for alot to give. Anyways, you're emotions were well portrayed here as well. No problem with you acting girly ;).

The next entry does indeed bring a flipside to the situation though. I've been in situations where there have been girls that like me. I currently am searchign for love, but some pople just dont seem right. My advice to you goes a little past this diary. I only advise you to find someone you feel right with, or else, it's emotional suicide.

You have some interesting teachers. Your fourth period teacher sounds like my biology teacher. Not only this, but he's a botonist. It makes me wonder sometimes. Ah well, we definately share teachers in common.

This entry made me think, even though it is short. I honestly think you made the right decision. Sometimes you need to remember that your friends will always be there for you, and the only way they will be, is if you are always there for them. You need to fall back on them sometimes.

This entry was interesting. I myself am agnostic in my religious beliefs, and I once went through what you went through here. A sense of fear of death. The way that I surpass that fear is to imagine myself on my deathbed and ask myself what do I really want at that time. I tell myself and mean fully that when I lie on my deathbed, I dont want to be worried about where I'm going. I want to be consoled by where I've been.

Your diary seems to be tantamount to a soap opera. Trust me, I often feel myself that my own life is a soap opera. Regarding sex before marriage, I am fine with it. What I dont agree with is sex before love. Its love that really counts. Regarding young love, I believe in it. I've lived it myself. But, I see so many people mistake greed and selfishness for love.

All in all, it's a great diary. I love your content, and your paragraphing smoothed out. It seems rather daylogish, and typically teenage, but you managed to convey emotiosnm quite well. There wasnt anything philosophical or particularly deep in it, however. The closest you got to that were your few entries on religion. In a few entries, you similarly touched on issues that mean alot to you. Anyways.. (35/50)

Grammar: Well.. besides the obvious bad punctuation in spots, the paragraphing in the first half of your diary is horrible. It just gets tiring to read long boxes of text ;).(4/10)

Glitter: You have a bio, but you aught to link it to your extras. Your movie reviews, surveys, and links are rather nice. You have a 101 facts, and a few quizes, as well as a cast page.(12/15)

Extra Credit: For luck ;)(1/5)

Lasting Impression: Yes, actually (7/10)

Will I Come Back?: Most likely not.(4/10)

Total: 95/160

Number of Entries Read: Most of them

Favorite Entry: This one, because I'm partial to philosophy.

Favorite Quote: It is one thing to present your opinion. It is entirely different when you present your opinion once, then keep presenting your opinion until you are satisfied that everbody around you has conformed to your idea.

Comments: Interesting diary. Keep it up, and good luck with life and love. Dont let the low score scare you, I just think there are some things you could use some improving on. I'd suggest a new layout and slight improvement on writing style, and I'm free for a re-review.

Reviewed by: Anthony