Username: Aww I just really like the sound of it. (5/5)

Title: Not bad, not bad. (4/5)

First Sight: Well, the picture of the lady like that is cool. Seems like too cluttered on both sides though. (7/10)

Your Sacrifice: You could archive. Otherwise great. (7/8)

Sparkling Diamond: There's so much on both right and left side. At first I didn't really notice anything on the right side but when I moved the scroll bar, saw some pictures, stuff about you, tag board, pictures of you, etc. And they're always there. The ones on the bottom of entries especially look out of place. And the Comments About Catpewk's diary isn't a link to anywhere. You should put key facts about major players and the stuff about yourself in a different entry. Also place buddies, other lists somewhere else. I think this is a Diaryland layout but you've added a lot more stuff to make it your own. Which is good. It gives you a higher score. But where are the next links?! My favorite part is probably that woman dressed in red white and blue. (12/25)

Guestbook: I don't think you have one. (0/2)

Readability: Full points here. (5/5)

The Love: Your first entry was pretty good. You kind of introduced yourself and gave us a tiny bit of info about past diaries, etc. You really jump around though. Like one second you're talking about getting passport stuff done then TV shows then whatever else. I liked it better when you're focusing on one topic for more than one paragraph. You put a lot (and I mean a lot) of pictures in your entries which is okay sometimes (because I really liked the one here but I'd like to read more of what you write. You should try describing whatever it is first, then add a photo later. Hmm, this one's decent. You don't go too in detail, but it's more than usual. You don't always have to tell us everything you did during the day, if you focused on a few things and gave your thoughts, feeling and emotions on them, that would be great. You talked about such stuff as your dad being dead but you never really said how you feel. To be honest, most of your entries bored me.. I'm sure if I knew you personally or we were email pals, I wouldn't mind because I want to know what's going on with you during the day, etc but diaries are where you put your inner feelings and emotion in, where you can let everything out. You started to here in the beginning but then went back to how it was before.

Okay, I hope this is an indication of how the rest of your entries will be because I found myself getting into it more. Well, the next entry is fine. Though I don't care about the shows you mention, it means something to you and it shows. You contemplate a bit about time travel, etc which is more of what I'm looking for and liking. You seem quite intelligent. I liked some of what you said here on thinking about the universe, etc but wish you had expanded on it instead of just including a picture of how it breaks down. I'd much rather know more about what you personally believe. Give me more of you!

Hmm this wasn't bad (first 2 paragraphs) because I was imagining it and everything. But you really focus a lot of your entries on the pictures you put up or websites or TV shows or whatever and sometimes I don't kow if you wrote that part of the etnry or not.

Ooh, ooh, this was good. Creative, interesting, made me want to read. It told me more about you too. I've seen that you can write well because some of your entries displayed that but for the most part you don't let me know a lot about yourself, feelings, etc. (38/50)

Grammar: Pretty good. No major problems. (10/10)

Glitter: Not too many in the usual sense but in each entry you have Favorite webpages, quote, puzzle, pictures and sometimes a joke of the day. Plus a list of all your fav diaries, rings, a little about you, etc on the side. I think my favorite picture was here and the cat with bubbles here. (8/15)

Extra Credit: Minus two because you don't have any next links, also minus one because I coudln't find Rouge Reviews link. But plus one because you seem like a good guy, one for some of the better pictures and one because I love your writing sometimes. So you're back at zero. Sorry. (0/5)

Lasting Impression: I don't know,... (5/10)

Will I Come Back?: Doubt it but maybe. Not often though. (5/10)

Total: 95/160

Number of Entries Read: 60 something-- almost all of them.

Favorite Entry: Maybe this.

Favorite Quote: I hope my ramblings are occasionally interesting to you, gentle reader - I know that writing this stuff down helps me clarify my thoughts, emotions and goals.

Comments: I'm kind of all commented out right now. Oh yea, by the way I still love your username.