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Username: Yes, yet another victim of evil. Splendid! The numbers I don't get, and evilkitty isn't really that creative or anything. But I can see it: the EVIL kitty. Lovely. And it's easy to remember as well. (3/5) Title: Sure it says something about you: You're disobedient and you're strange, or wait is that Emily... I guess it goes with the layout so... (4/5) First Sight: Red and Black. My favorite colors. Well I saw that Emily faded into the Cat, and that's cool. Really... if you like Emily the Strange, then I'm staying. (8/10) Your Sacrifice: Your archives look good, and their organized so that's good. You update pretty much every day, and that's good, but sometimes you have 3-4 day gaps, but that's okay. We all have lives. Aside from the fact that your dates and your short descriptions sort of look unbalanced, everything seems almost perfect. (7/8) Sparkling Diamond: The layout is simple, but simple is good. I like the fading bit, like I said... The colors go together perfectly and everything seems organized and well. Navigation is easy up there, you have lots of extras. Hmm! Wonderful. You've handled the layout well, even though you've added a few of your own extras, and that's cool. Definitely. (25/25) Guestbook: Sure, your guestbook is well organized, still the same colors, the evilkitty. That's good. Love the title, too. (2/2) Readability: Oh yeah, sure it's great. (5/5) The Love: Your entries aren't anything too intersting, but I read them all. They're usually day-to-day stuff. You have some special entries, but nothing too interesting, and nothing that really stands out. Sometimes you say a lot of stuff without any explanation or detail, so it would be good if you added some of that. Also, you have some special pages like your link pages, and your quizes. You might want to add a link to those special pages under your navigation. It'll make things a bit easier. You talk about lots of your improvements and new ideas for your diary. I think these ideas are good! The ones you've done should go under navigation, and the ones you haven't should happen. Don't worry. People read your diary. I like this entry. Finally a bit of explanation on your life! It's true, I did think you were an "over-happy freak," no offense. Here you pour in some meaning to your life, making it more interesting and stuff. Now we know some stuff about you, and that's good. With that, I almost made some sort of movie in my mind, which is good. Trust me. I also like that last sentence, even though it sounds pretty corny: I'm glad I have such great friends. Happy you realized that. I like your Friday Fives. They're interesting... sometimes even funny. Keep on doing that. I sorta look forward to them, as stupid as that sounds... :) Thank God it's Friday! I can really relate to you in this entry. I felt the same way earlier this year when school was ending and when it was beginning. It's true, true. In this entry, I like how well you described your shoe. It's a strange thing to describe, but hey, it was described well, so good on you! Description is a virtue, keep that in mind. Your entry about 8th grade is good. I don't know why, but I see these kinds of entries all the time, especially when school starts or something. But they're useful. In this entry, I don't know. For a moment, I got scared... and didn't want to give you a bad score, but despite this entry, I will grade you fairly, and if you get mad at me, take it out on me, not Rouge Reviews. After I read this entry, I sort of felt sorry for you. Once again you realize you have great friends. Cruddy days are really of no use. Agreed. Your rhymes on drugs are funny, regardless of what my brother says. I hope you don't take drugs, because I... am anti-drug. Just saying. Drugs are bad! This entry, I absolutely love! First you raise a lot of good points when you pour out your thoughts. I like your paragraph about the mentally retarded children. Your quotes are amazing. You also give some great advice, and your poem is really good. Didn't know you were a writer, too! That is definitely one of your good, if not, one of your best entries. This entry... how can you hate Linkin Park? That's got to change! Definitely! I'd LOVE to take points of for that, but I'm not that mean... but how can you Linkin Park?! Hmph. I never thought Friday Fives could be so nasty. Anyway, this entry is great, how you're describing your Halloween costume. I can see the costume right now. Its... well, fairy-ish. ;) Great time in band, I'm sure. Sounds great. I don't know... that time sort of reminds me of myself when I was in middle school. Great dolls. Let me guess... the first one i can't, you were born in February and you come from Texas. Am I right? Some of your entries are boring, but the ones I listed above are brilliant. Keep up the brilliant-ness. (39/50) Grammar: There are a lot of "!!!!!!" or "......." around your entries. You're either really perky and happy (which isn't Emily) or you just like holding down buttons. Sometimes spelling can be an issue, but most of the time, it's nothing too big. On the other hand, sometimes your entries have perfect punctuation/grammar/spelling, and others don't. You can improve. I'm sure you can. (5/10) Glitter: Yeah, you've got a lot of extras, but they just need to be put in the right place (like links under the navigation). Your extras are good. (10/15) Extra Credit: No... not really. Nothing I could think of. (0/5) Lasting Impression: Sure. Won't be fresh on my mind all the time though, but I'll remember it. (7/10) Will I Come Back?: Sure, I guess! You're an interesting sort of person, but I couldn't exactly count on it. Chances are, yes, though. (8/10) Total: 123/160 Number of Entries Read: Every single one. Favorite Entry: This one I think. Kum-ba-ya, My Lord! Never mind... Couldn't help laughing when I read it, though. Or maybe this one. It got me thinking, and I loved it. Favorite Quote: Now, Cleveland is this little town where like everywhere you go, you see someone you know. I was very lucky not to see anyone I knew. I'm not sure. It reminds me of something ... its on the tip of my tongue. Or... You never know when the person you least expected to make something out of their life is the next Bill Gates. Great quote there. Comments: Oh, you've been to Singapore? Cool. Great diary! Glad I could relate to you sometimes. You're an interesting person and a writer, and you should keep it up. It took me a long time to think of a fair score of your content. Reviewed by: Aless
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