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evilwizard6

Zafro...Sifl and Olly...Aless.[pretty looking socks]

Username: Well, I'm not a fan of evil wizards, but your username does have a certain appeal even though I can't quite place my finger on it. What does the 6 represent though? Anyway that number kind of looks like it completes it. (4/5)

Title: I don't really understand the title, but it has something to do with your layout because I see Zafro Designs, sock puppets, and there's probably a deeper meaning that I would get if you explained it. At least the title shows your unique, free spirit kind of side.(3/5)

First Sight: I like color more than just black and white but this doesn't look too bad. I like how everything is organized and I'm guessing the design is done by yourself, though the question mark right before your username on the bottom right side should probably be a copyright sign. So I see "Zafro" "Sifl and Olly" on the top which is interesting. How did you come up with these names? I think this adds to your title because it's as if they're all on a stage and you're there too. (8/10)

Your Sacrifice: I like how you have your dates like date month and year. Really interesting titles that make me want to read too. Plus all archived nicely. You update pretty well but sometimes not until a few days into the month. Keep up the consistency though. (7/8)

Sparkling Diamond: It's so great that you designed your diary yourself. I am almost always in awe of people who do that because I'm so HTML-illiterate. It's a very organized design and I like how you've boxed the entry part in as well as the links. The little Imood thing is cute especially because the background blends in perfectly, and it adds a bit of color. Orange isn't my favorite but it looks fine and probably says something about your personality. The sock images are great and I imagine that you drew them. I really like how it looks and the words on the top looks like it's written by hand. Nicely done. I actually like the "font" of the words, and the quote at the bottom "this is MY united states of whatever" [you have no idea how many times I've heard or seen that recently!] looks good, although I'm not really sure how that goes with the rest of the design. Maybe because they're socks and singing and you can do whatever? I love how the links fade when you run mouse over it. Great effect. One thing that kind of bothers me is that the entry words are too close to the line on the left ... I usually like there to be some space. Hmm, the more I think about it, the more I see that this layout is pretty darn complex with the characters involved and so on. (22/25)

Guestbook: Oh you don't have a guestbook. Sorry, I can't give you any points. (0/2)

Readability: Great font for the layout. (5/5)

The Love: You are such a singular individual. Of course I knew that before, but I'm proven even further in this diary. It's very cool and interesting though. You introduce yourself as a Death Knight and an alien from the planet Moo. Haha, short term memory loss always reminds me of Dory now. You claim you're the highest of evil, yet I just can't seem to believe that. You're going to have to do more to convince me! I just know you're too good of a person to really mean harm towards people. It's good that you're so involved with the Death Knight thing, for a little bit but I hope you switch the focus of your diary soon. I'd like to learn more about the real you, after all. It is somewhat interesting to hear you tell the tale of what Death Knight is going through especially because you make it all dramatic and I kind of feel like I'm in a storybook, but it's not really about your life. Maybe it has some parallel to it, and that's what you're trying to do but somehow I doubt it. It seems like it's just for fun and while it does make me smile and laugh, I am yearning to know about your real life. Well here is something. You have an engaging style that can probably cheer anyone up. I love how sarcastic you can get too.

Oh I can relate to you about this because I've gotten many an email from people wanting to be friends and whatnot. Some even ask for my hand in marriage or something similar. I don't question why I'm getting these as much though, because I've put my information on many penpal sites. They do get really annoying though. I just don't reply and hit delete. That's probably the best way to deal with it. But if the same person keeps writing to you, that's not very good. I'm sorry you feel so weirded out about this.

You like to write about lots of random things in your diary. Many things that raise my eyebrows and wonder, but that's okay. Also seems like you have battles with your brother and homework a lot. It can get pretty ranty but not in a oh stop complaining kind of way. You make it so that I can understand what you're going through, sort of. You exaggerate a lot about practically everything and even though sometimes you might be serious about it, it usually comes out to be really funny and cute. Like this is a good example. Ooh, you have half a British accent? Sexy, aren't you? Don't mind me, I absolutely love English accents, especially full ones. Well it makes you all the cooler to have this kind of accent. One of a kind. Oh I can just imagine you in school with friends, talking in that accent. It's hilarious!

Oh no, sorry to hear you're feeling so down in this entry. You always seem so happy, full of life and energy. But everyone has a bad day, or week, or month, or year... For some it's worse than others, but I have no doubt you will [and have already, of course since this was in September] get through it and come out of it with new perspective and renewed love of everything. Okay, well I don't know that but it sounded good right? Right? Ooh it seems like you attract the opposite of who you like. Maybe you should be glad someone likes you? And pretend it's not him.. I'm so sorry that one of your best friends seems to have forgotten about you. I hope this will clear up soon. I'm sure that person means no heartbreak to you. Aww, don't say that you're a bad leader. I can't let people say things that aren't true. It will get better. Well you've written some great poetry in this time. Even though not very uplifting, it is still good work. Ohmygoodness, I can't believe your best friend isn't there for you, as described here. I didn't think he had really forgotten about you, and I'm sure that's not the case. You've talked to him and this is how he feels? This can't be the end after everything!

Your mind is certainly a work of imagination and full of interesting things going on. Aww, that's such a cute Tigger layout! Nice job. I love the pictures and font you've used.

I enjoyed this because this is something that means a lot to you and it shows in your writing. It's really interesting to learn about the people you know, your interactions and relationships with them and I like how you went in depth and gave your feelings and interpretations on the matter/ situation at hand.

Wow, you went to Hong Kong with friends? That's pretty awesome. Where do you live originally? Oh I can really understand where you're coming from about the diary not being so amazing anymore. I've felt that way before, in fact at the moment I have that feeling about my diary and have stopped updating in it. I even put a goodbye message up and locked it, but maybe someday I'll pick it up again. Right now I'm too in love with real life and writing in my paper diary is more than enough. It shows your dedication that you'd still write in your online diary even though it doesn't give you as much pleasure as before. It's nice that you can use the internet at the Hong Kong International Airport. Yea, I'd be happy that it's free too. Wow, sorry to hear you hated the night so much and all those women were around. I love that you can be so descriptive ... just makes me visualize what you're seeing.

Yes, yes, yes I'm so happy to see that you're accepting love after being in denial and saying stuff like you're not very romantic but now you are turning to be that way. It's so exciting that you are in love during this time and we're getting to see how it's going through the diary.

Ohmygosh, one time I had an authentic French dinner with the French club, at one of our French teacher's house and it was so good. So it was cool to read about this. We also had a fondue party before too. It was great! Frenchier huh? I'm glad you got to practice your French. I took it for three years, but can't speak it well. I'm not very good in that aspect.

I'm glad you're writing much more about your feelings and I'm learning a lot about Jacques and so on. I didn't know if the diary was going to be all fun and random thoughts, and it obviously isn't which I'm thankful about. You open yourself pretty well and we get to learn a lot about yourself through reading entries, not just the all about you things. And I like that you're pretty descriptive. This is a very cool entry about what's on your mind and I like how you define daydreaming and worrying. I like your choice of words throughout.

It's good that you realize here that your earlier entries were pretty crazy and yup, you said it, immature. It's wonderful to see how much you've grown and everything you're writing in your diary now is much more grown up. Honestly, I didn't know if I could give you much of a score if you kept writing like you were in the beginning, but now you've improved greatly.

Cool you reviewed a game here. I don't really play video games, but at least I've heard of Halo and seen other people play it! Yup, friends in college have enlightened me so I'm not completely out of it.

Aww, sorry to hear you feel so stressed and busy around this time. I know what you're going through though, and I'm sure most everyone else has gotten through those kinds of times in some point of their lives. It's true that there's so much to do right now. But I still love the month of December and winter in general.

Aww, what an entry. True true. I love how soft you've become! Pretty profound words that go straight to the heart. And he makes you feel? How sweet and romantic is that! It's so heartwarming. (47/50)

Grammar: Well I'm sure you are capable of doing much better, but most of the earlier entries at least you don't use very good punctuation and the like. Still I can tell that you know the conventions of good grammar. It's just a matter of implementing that knowledge. Well you do that much more now. (9/10)

Glitter: Imood, days til your birthday which looks fine on the layout, links, about yourself-- 104 things was great and I have that long survey too! as well as the palm reading and so much more about yourself-- cool, hmm Random facts setup looks kind of like how I had my intro to me page with the name/meanings/nicknames/fav books and movies which is fine but do you think you could credit me, Kathy for that? Merci beaucoup in advance and nice trading card, ooh a cast too, layouts-- I like the moonrise and "Flowers: this thing I call love" very much. So pretty-full. (15/15)

Extra Credit: One for requesting me [gives me such a nice fuzzy feeling], three for self-design and one for such a great read. (5/5)

Lasting Impression: Pretty good. (8/10)

Will I Come Back?: Probably to check up on you but I don't know how often. (7/10)

Total: 140/160

Number of Entries Read: All 78 entries.

Favorite Entry: Wow, this is wonderful. Jacques sounds lovely. Ooh, I love how you go back to the sunset too, and called it sophisticated. Perfect word.

Favorite Quote: [1] Call me when I wake from this horrible nightmare, full of depression, misery and despair, your ears probably ache from my poems that are cheap, so now I stop, I'm way in too deep.

[2] but my dad said that in Saudi they treat women worse then their camels. So it reminded me how women are not treated fairly, and that I'm a woman, and therefore, my dreams of visiting Saudi (if... i ever dreamed them) are now clearly shattered, because if I visit, I will be only a simple female camel to whoever has power over me. This, of course, is only another addition to why life is horrible for people like me, not to mention all women. I decided to make my essay on Saudi sound like Saudi is hell on Earth, so to share my misery with anyone of their population.

*[3]* The color of the sky is SO wonderful, it looks like a quilt God weaved himself. There are shades of purple so dark, it feels like night is just WAITING to take over. Under the purple are the most amazing shades of blue, and I'm sure it shows EVERY single hue of the color, going from navy to incredibly dark blue. Under the blues is a little strip of pink, and I know pink wouldn't exactly go if you were wearing clothes, but in this case, pink makes the sight look even better. Much better. And under all those colors is this teeny tiny strip of yellow, meaning the very last moments in the sky for the sun. It's so romantic. I don't mean that as a joke - it's romantic for real. And I'm a person who wouldn't usually know romance if it came up and smacked me in the face, but for some reason, tonight, I know this is romantic. It's beatiful, and I think I've fallen in love with the sky. I know I might've described it a little badly, but if you can't see it, see it as the most romantic, most amazing, most PERFECT sunset in your life, because that's what it is. If you were able to see it for real just now, I'm sure you would fall in love with it, too. ... Oh what a beauty-full description and romantic ~~swoon~~

Comments: Good score. =) I'm glad I got to review your diary, though sorry I've made you wait so long, as well as others. Well, keep it up!

Reviewed by: Kathy