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Simply Beautiful Username: It's different from normal "i heart me" or "i love me" so I think it's refreshing, creative and sweet. Also the "eye" part adds layers of meaning and I like the phrase "heart" whatever it is you love. And I'm glad it's "me". (5/5) Title: It is a nice, short and simple title. And it's also the name of the layout. Still cool even though not thought of by yourself.(4/5) First Sight: I like the pink and white colors together. And the font for the words Simply Beautiful is nice. It looks pretty organized too, but I wasn't blown away. (7/10) Your Sacrifice: Some same day entries especially in June, a couple of skipped days. (7/8) Sparkling Diamond: The design is by femme designs. I like the sound of it! As mentioned before, the font for Simply Beautiful really is that and it's nice how only the outside edge is pink, inside white. I don't really like the look of the flower on the "ful" part though. The main picture on the top left side is good though and the flower there is perfect. The light pink, white and bit of darker pink color scheme is fresh feeling. You've made the boxes organized and nothing's cluttered. (22/25) Guestbook: I don't like all the grey, but the picture is okay. It's not my tase though. But wait, you made the layout yourself for your guestbook? Because it says "based on a blue-swirl design...(3/2) Readability: Yes the font's fine. (5/5) The Love: I like the way you write. It's in detail and you try to sort out your feelings. Some of it is really introspective and what you're feeling comes through. This was the first entry I read and it's definitely interesting. I feel so bad for you though, it's never fun when someone doesn't seem to return the same feelings. You're allowed to write about whatever you want though. I sometimes have a specific topic in mind for what to write about, but it changes because I add other stuff and that's okay. You should write about the camping trip of course, but also don't feel that you can't add other feelings, different situations. When you use dialogue, I think it'd be easier if you add paragraph breaks or something to differentiate between speakers. This was short but emotional. I'm sorry you're going through all this. The next one is nice too even though it doesn't include a lot of feelings, I'm glad you got to see the puppy. You described it pretty well. Wow, you put the the letter you're writing to Ricky in your diary. You're right, you do have jumbled thoughts and you're confused but it's good you wrote the letter, I hope that will help. It really helped us see what you're going through. I'm sorry the end result wasn't so good. Sometimes though, you do an overview about your day and that's okay but when you mention all those names, I can't remember them even though I've read the cast list. (44/50) Grammar: Very few spelling errors. Good grammar. (10/10) Glitter: A whole separate page for Extras and pictures. I like your bio, links, rings, (the fanlistings are so cute!)... And you have so many fans! 101 Things, artwork, old diary, handwriting, surveys, quizzes, and a currently section that's short and sweet. (15/15) Extra Credit: One for all that extra work put into extras, one for being the first person to request, one for making me a button, and one for that great personality! (4/5) Lasting Impression: It's made quite an impression on me. (9/10) Will I Come Back?: Yes I might actually. I just liked your diary in general. (8/10) Total: 143/160 Number of Entries Read: June 2003, July 2003 and a few random ones in April and May. Favorite Entry: The ones I mentioned in the content part. Favorite Quote: I feel like I deserve someone who wants me, someone who is interested in what I have to say and who wants to talk to me. Someone who thinks about me more than just when I'm there, and someone who wants to spend time with me. Someone who loves me and treats me like any girl would want to be treated. Someone who understands me and listens to me when I just want someone to talk to. Someone who I can trust and who trusts me, who cares enough to try to make things better when they're wrong, someone who will love me "for better and for worse" and who will make me happy and be happy with me. Suggestions: Maybe center the quizzes that are smaller. Write more introspective, feeling, thinking entries. Don't feel you have to confine it to what you did during that day. Comments: I loved all the pictures of you, your bf, family. And what they say is true, you are pretty! Reviewed by: Kathy
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