Username: This is a pretty standard username. Easy to think up, because it's just your name [cute one at least] and the year you were born. Not very creative. (2/5)

Title: The title is somewhat better. Skin has an intimate feeling to the word and saying "want your skin up" is interesting. (3/5)

First Sight: Wow, that's a GREAT picture and I like the way it's framed, the font used is the best. I don't like that the entry is centered though. (9/10)

Your Sacrifice: Wow you have no archives. Definitely think of doing that soon because you have so many entries. You update regularly. (6/8)

Guestbook: I didn't find a guestbook link. Can't give you any points here. Sorry. (0/2)

Sparkling Diamond: This layout is designed by Diva Desgins and it's a pretty good one, I think. The white lines framing the picture in that way is very cool and gives it a more racy and fast feel. The picture itself is obviously quite sexual. It's a good looking couple, especially the guy's built body and the side of his face looks sexy. I like how he's positioned.. Just over the girl's neck, breathing, almost as if he's sleeping near her. She's very beauitful and has distinguished lashes which I envy and her skin, eyes, hair is shown clearly. I like the background too-- the shiny sparkle of the pillow and the green, bronze, and beige, brown colors come together. The little lyric at the bottom is good and I especially liked the gorgeous font used for "satisfacation." It's also lovely how it's white and has a glowy, sharp effect. The Imood looks fine with the layout and links are pretty good. My only complaint would be the centered entry. It just doesn't fit well. Also the previous/next links should be centered. It would give the page more balance. (23/25)

Readability: Your font and the size of it is fine. (5/5)

The Love: This is the first entry of your diary, and it's pretty typical of a teen. You write what you did and don't go into detail about any of it. Just mention the movies you watched, survey you're filling out, and shopping, etc. It is interesting to you and people who know you but it was just a sort of highlights of the day thing. The next one you didn't write a whole lot more either. You could've went in depth about "the college thing" because that's interesting. A lot of people have to go through that process and it would've been nice to hear your thoughts on what it was like to do it. And where you wanted to go, places you're applying to, all that good stuff. The one after that, here was better though. You wrote who you would miss in school the most and it was good to be introduced to some people in your life. It makes me kind of closer to you because now I know something about the people you hang out with and what you do with them.

I hope later your entries won't be like this all the time because it's kind of boring to read a recount of your day. You seem to have an intelligent mind, make it known in your diary! Ooh, I agree with you about Clay being so good on American Idol I love that show, but I probably won't be able to watch the third season because I'm living in the college dorms and didn't bring a TV with me. Anyway, I'm glad you're a Clay fan. Even when you're writing about things that interest me, though, you just mention it and it's on a very superficial level so I can't really comment on it a whole lot. You don't go into what exactly you like about Clay or how his voice, singing makes you feel; or the emotions you go through during end of school year and everything. You kind of show your frustration with the graduation ceremony practices by asking what's so hard about it and such, but that doesn't really dig deep.

Hmm, maybe this has the beginnings of something more. When you mentioned the cute guy you saw, I was itching to find out more. What did you notice most about him, what did he look like, what was he wearing, how did he make you feel? It's hard to get into it if you just say you saw someone nice looking and leave it at that. Well, this entry didn't turn out to be much different from the others. I think in this one you've branched out a little bit though. I didn't know that you enjoyed singing so much and that it meant so much to you. It'd be cool to know who you think you sound like. I can relate to you when you say not many people have heard you sing. It's the same way with me, but unlike you I don't know if I sing well. If I did know I had a good voice, I wouldn't mind singing in front of anynone though. So I hope you are able to let people that voice of yours. It sounds like you have a talent; it'd be great to share it. But then your next entry continues on about what you did during the day. Those are fine, but when there's no feeling in it, can get very dry and monotonous.

Well, I'm excited this is happening between you and Chris. I'm happy for you especially since I know you really wanted to be with him. This entry broke free from the bounds of daylog for once. You told about your feelings on Chris and it's sweet to hear about. Then there was a paragraph detailing about your doggie and even though he didn't do a good thing, it was good description on what you thought about what he did. And the entry after that is good too. I liked hearing about your red hair and your perception of how you look and think of yourself. Always interested in reading that kind of stuff. You can do a pretty nice job writing about this boy makes you feel, here.

Wow, this is short but full of emotion and really shows what you're going through. My heart goes out to you and I know what you're going through, can relate to what you're feeling. The despair is torture, but hang in there okay? Whoa, this entry hit me in the face pretty hard because it was one big paragraph. It really liked what you had to say though. It seemed kind of reflective, inner and you really openend your heart in it. So, I liked that one.

This entry on what you would change is interesting. But then for long while, over a month, your entries are only about your day and they don't go deeper. They are only one or two short ones that are pretty good and interesting; the rest seem like they don't need to be there or it's all about superificial things in your life. Also, there were a bunch of entries where it was just lyrics or a sentence of something. It just doesn't say much about you and inner reflection, thoughts and feelings, emotions and personal opinion. I know a few things about you, but not on an inner, profound level. Most of the information I have gathered is stuff like what shows you enjoy, music, boys, stuff like that. While that's nice to know about a person, in order to really get to know someone, I want to get a look at their perspective, views and such on things. And I'm not really sure how you think on topics that are important in life. Then some of your entries are really cryptic.

But, this is a good entry because you actually took time to explain the situation you were in and the feelings you had. When you say the "walls are coming down" that kind of has a reference to the walls you put up when you write your entries. Anyway it's a beautiful entry and I like the way you worded everything. I have to admit this one is probably a favorite. So that recent one was good but there needs to be more of that kind. (25/50)

Grammar: You're not bad at this except you use internet lingo and too many exclamation points. (7/10)

Glitter: Review links, surveys, things you love/hate, quizzes though most of the images don't work, song lyrics, disclaimer, cast, fav quotes, favs, rings, why chose layout. (10/15)

Extra Credit: One because that really is a wicked layout. (1/5)

Lasting Impression: Maybe. (4/10)

Will I Come Back?: Most likely not ever. (2/10)

Total: 97/160

Number of Entries Read: All of them!

Favorite Entry: This one went pretty deep about your relationships with friends in high school.

Favorite Quote: I was thinking today.. and I've come to the conclusion that I really like Chris.. and I think it scares me because I don't want to set myself up for another heartbreak, because this last time just took the cake. I remember driving home crying one day... not like balling my eyes out or anything, but I had tears running down my cheecks.. (damn that troll) but anyway.. I do really like Chris, but I don't think I can deal with another heartache. I mean, I'm not pressed over him or anything, but I dunno.. He's really easy to talk to, and he's real funny, and he's hot, and he is a sweetie..

*And so the other day when you had me pinned down to the floor, and you slowly lowered your lips to mine, and very softly kissed me, I didn't know what to think... and I still don't*

Comments: You have the beginnings of what can be a great diary.