Username: Well I like the sound of the moon [luna is kind of romantic and mysterious, as is the word aira], aira almsot looks like aura, which would've been awesome. (4/5)

Title: At least you don't have the "version something" part that I hate. Though do you really want to be associated with a lifeless doll, even though it's on your template, I don't know. (3/5)

First Sight: Ooh, I like the purple-ish and pink colors, though not really the red links. Then the blue of the eyes.. wow. (9/10)

Your Sacrifice: Wow, really different layout. Greens and pale flesh tones. It's all right, but maybe you should change it to match your current layout? It's kind of disconcerting to see such a drastic change. You update pretty well, though some skips. (5/8)

Sparkling Diamond: You designed this yourself, which makes it so much better and even credited the websites that helped you. There's a lot of space on the right side, but it doesn't look unbalanced and I like how the background is white, but I see a bit of a pink tinge-- maybe I'm looking too hard, but it's not pure white. I don't really think the blue scroll bar goes with it though. Maybe if you made it the color of the doll's poink part of the shirt. It's cool how you put everything in sections like that so people can find all your favorite links and review stuff right away. Usually something like this might look cluttered, but you have a nice arrangement going on. And the counter you have looks fine. It's much better when they're small like that. Even though you give the doll the title of "lifeless doll" [nice choosing of right font], it doesn't look too bad, sinister or scary which is what I would've expected if I only saw the name of it. I really like the blue of her eyes and the way her hair is splayed out, so smooth and everything. It's very cool how you've placed her on your layout. Maybe the words come a little too close to all the links though. And red doesn't look the greatest on purple, though it doesn't make it look bad. Nice job. (22/25)

Guestbook: Purple layout, still can't see the image on it but I'm going to go ahead with your review anyway. I hope you don't mind, I just don't want to keep waiting. (2/2)

Readability: It's a bit on the small side, especially the date and time part. Though all of it is kind of tiny. It's all right to read though. (4/5)

The Love: I've actually reviewed you before at another site and I don't remember every subject you brought up, but after I saw titles with "Aki" in it, I sort of recall the situation you went through and how you came to disliking, hating her so much because of all she's done. I remember you did a good job writing about it, explaining it and getting emotions across. Pretty interesting to read your goals for the coming school year here. I liked hearing what you had to say and your inner feelings about what you need to do. But it seems like the entries after that are detailing about school information and that's all right, but these are the ones that really make me sit up and want to read slowly and savor all the words. Because you are a decent writer, and you can weave words so well sometimes. It's in a way that makes the reader feel closer to you and that you're making it more personal for everyone so that they can understand and relate to what you're feeling.

Oh this is really nice, when you thanked me for the review I gave you. [The link should be to lunaaira.html though] I'm glad you were so happy to receive it. It was enjoyable to go through your diary. You do a good job of pouring your heart out when you're talking to Aki or about yourself. You seem like someone who knows who she is and is forgiving toward others, though if they really do something bad to you, they should watch out. But eventually you start ceasing to care, and you get on with your life so that's always good. But then you had an entry talking about how no one really knows you, and I can sympathize with you because I don't think anyone truly understands me either.

I'm so sorry to read this, about you wanting to lock your diary. Many people end up doing that, but I see you haven't. It's good that you stayed strong and let anyone see your words, and what you put here. Even though it's scary to think maybe family member can know what you write here and other people you don't want to be there. It's too bad that everyone around you takes you for granted, or that you have that feeling. Maybe it's not true at all, they just don't know how to show their appreciation. I bet that doesn't make it better though. It's horrible that some people laugh at depressed people. Shows how little they know about anything!

Sometimes it seems like you only updated to talk about new layout, or a game on the computer, or something related to links or organizing your diary. A few of these kinds of entries are okay, but not a ton in a row.

Wow, it's awesome that you got to see Moulin Rouge on the stage; that must've been the most incredible thing. Magical is a good word for it. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. It's an amazing story of course.

Sorry to hear you were depressed here but I can totally relate to you about a boring life. In summer, I didn't have a lot going on, and now it's much better but today I was planning to do all these things, but couldn't decide which ones to do, so ended up not being able to go to any of them because everyone had already left. It's horrible.

I don't know how old you were, but I knew you were pretty young. Still it was interesting to learn you're 15. I probably knew this from before, but it was still good to see for certain. I thought you were in 16 age group range, because you're so advanced in thinking about your life and the people in it, who you are and stuff like that. And wow you just turned this age! This month, I mean. Very nice.

Whoa, This really gives your emotions and I enjoyed reading it, getting into your mind.

I don't know if you got it yet, but OurWorld is s a good place to host images. I'm not sure if that is the right address, but check it out. Most likely, if it doesn't go to it, you'll have to add a www in front. But I think it's correct.

You do a good job in explaining about things that are on your mind about friendships and other people's behavior, your opinion of it. Some of the entries didn't thrill me or make me want to read, but others were wonderful. (42/50)

Grammar: Nothing really big. Just some past tense problems, like "learnt" is learned. Small stuff.(8/10)

Glitter: Favorite links, links, reviews, buddy list, official links, fanlistings, fav entries, dreams, cast. But I don't see "extras.html" page on the template and when I tried to go there, it's an error page. (10/15)

Extra Credit: Three for self-design and one because you seem like a good person. (4/5)

Lasting Impression: Hmm pretty good. (7/10)

Will I Come Back?: Probably not. (5/10)

Total: 125/160

Number of Entries Read: About 100 of them.

Favorite Entry:

Favorite Quote: I pray for the people who dies in the september 11th attack and the people who died when in the Afghanistan and Iraq war... because all were victims terrorism. And until somebody decides to forgive, or start using water to fight fire... this war is going to rage on. And more people are going to die. More people are going to loose thier families. No one can call themselves the good-guys anymore. Cause all sides have sinned and killed. All sides have spread terrorism.
Good points!

Comments: Please don't think because you didn't get a very high score, I didn't like your diary. That's not the case.