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Username: It's probably your initials right? It looks okay together. Interesting. (4/5) Title: I definitely like the title plenty. It gives a fairy tale kind of feel to it which goes with the layout. (5/5) First Sight: I like the picture, but it seems the girl is outlined so it's not part of the moon, but placed on top of it. The white part on the black looks better. Interesting how the links are placed. It's in a good color. The dress and wings on the girl are gorgeous. (9/10) Your Sacrifice: This is weird. When I clicked on your Older link, nothing was there. I'll just have to press on previous links a bunch to get back. You update well though. (8/8) Sparkling Diamond: This is a new design and I really love the picture. The girl is so pretty with the dress on. That dress is an absolute beauty. Especially how it drapes down from legs. Anyway there's a lot of blank space above the picture, but I like how the purple links are placed. Looks pretty neat actually. (22/25). Guestbook: A regular template. Fine for now, but I'm sure you can find one to your liking at GBook Layouts owned by Blue Swirl.(1/2) Readability: Font looks fine. (5/5) The Love: I really like the way you write. Of course everything would've been more enjoyable if there was a working Older page... You write mostly short entries and short paragraphs as well but they're well thought out and interesting, sometimes funny, always engaging. All your poems/stories are soo great! I love the words you chose to use and the subject matters. (46/50) Grammar: Mostly fine.(9/10) Glitter: You've got tons. Just check out all she has; they're great. (15/15) Extra Credit: Two on extras, one on personality, two on great creative works. (5/5) Lasting Impression: It's good. (9/10) Will I Come Back?: Probably (9/10) Total: 147/160 Number of Entries Read: All, since a new diary. Favorite Entry: Ooh, I liked this It seems we have a lot in common. And this is a really gorgeous entry. Favorite Quote: Many, many, many. But here's a taste: As if the simple words could heal everything, soothe anything, kiss each and every tear away, promise the arrival of the next sunrise, while breaking both the coldest and gentlest of hearts, a simple, painful, passionate, deep sense of helplessness and promises broken, a mockery, while it is a healing.... four simple words, four simple syllables, capable of stirring such emotions.... Suggestions: Please please please fix your older.html page. And since you don't have too many entries so far, maybe make rest of entries to be same as the layout you have now? I think it suits you much better and it just looks good that way. I see now you have older entries linked. That's good, but I think you should archive (by month is the usualy way). And the "next" links don't work (but previous ones do) Comments: Well you better be very pleased that I spent so much time backtracking to read real entries from you. I don't like to skip names on Pending list, so I had to keep doing that. But I liked being able to see all your wonderful extras. You've put a lot of time in this. I'm sorry I couldn't spend more time to review you but I will come back in a few days time to look at it at my leisure. I'll also think about putting you on my Fame Page. Reviewed by: Kathy
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