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I Kick Ass! Username: When I saw your username, I fell in love with it. It's beautiful. It just sort of has that ring to it. The words go together like they were born brother and sister. I absolutely love your username. It's original and it's easy to remember... (5/5) Title: Well, yeah, I'm sure you do kick ass, but it's not really original or creative or anything. It just goes with the layout, so that's nothing really new . (2/5) First Sight: I saw that it was orange, and I like the color orange. The picture was pretty cute, too. It was sorta well organized, and it looked easy to go through, so yeah, I guess I would stay, even if I wasn't a reviewer. (8/10) Your Sacrifice: Your archive page is incredibly long, and unorganized. That made it hard to remember which entry I was on, so it didn't look especially too nice. But you update several times a day, which is great, with the occasional 1 or 2 day break. (5/8) Sparkling Diamond: The colors definitely match. I really like the picture of the girl. It's cute, and it's got attitude. However, you have some older1 and older links down there that are hard to see. Also, your tagboard is sort of in the wrong place. Maybe you could move that to the right of the entry box. Otherwise, the layout is rather flawless. I can see you added a few links of your own up there because of your special pages, and that's great. Even though there are a lot, it still looks okay, and it doesn't seem to look cluttered. Speaking of extras, your Imood can go on the template (when you change it and stuff) so you don't need to post it every entry. I'm just saying that... (20/25) Guestbook: No guestbook (or at least no link to it). (0/2) Readability: Yeah, sure, I can read it easily. (5/5) The Love: HERE, I have to say, is where you go sort of wrong. I was going through your other reviews, and I have to say I agree with them in this department. Some of your entries are rather short and pointless, while others are long and rather boring. Some are pretty interesting, though. But most are nothing too special to people who don't know you in real life. In other words, you have day-to-day entries. There were a few entries I found interesting (Example), and they brought a little life into your entries. I started on your first entry. Your first paragraph was really interesting, and I can relate, because I have a little brother, too. The first paragraph sort of makes me think that you're an interesting person, and you'll somehow be like me, also. You say you're sacrastic and prone to crushes. That's an important fact. Just like most girls your age, and sometimes even me. I like your quote on vowels: "I figured he didn't like vowels very much b/c he never uses them." Good point. The way you describe him is interesting though, making him seem more interesting then he might be to you. It's sort of witty in a strange way. In this entry, you said you finished THE ONCE AND A FUTURE KING (in less than a week). It would've been nice if you told us some stuff about the book, or what you thought about it. That's what you need more in your entries. What YOU think about things, and a little more background information. It will make things more interesting. Just a tip. You also could've done this when you finished the second part of it. This entry, I can relate to. I've felt the same way a lot of times. I like your philosophy, as well. It makes sense, I guess. Guys can be that way. And hey, I don't know what bank means, either. Not the bank that he used, anyway. Actually, this is the entry I can probably relate to most. Everything you say in that entry somehow ties to me. I wish I could leave my brother out on the street, sometimes I want to keep guys to myself, and I hate that "bye" cycle on MSN and AIM. Wow. When I read that entry, I was seriously laughing because it sounded so much like me. I could hardly believe it. How many times have I tried to fight this back? I know, I've done it a few times, and it happens just like how you said it did. You're right. Everything you say in that entry, I have to agree with. It's just so annoying when people do that. Okay, you almost burned yourself with a blowdrier? That's sort of hard to believe, that freaky at the same time. I can just imagine what that must've been like. Poor, poor you. Hope nothing happened. You know, like brain damage or memory loss or anything. Nice choices of music here. OH, I love Linkin Park, TOO. Actually, I like all the styles you listen to, but not usually pop. I prefer Beethoven though. I would ask BowWow the same questions. I bet his tattoos aren't real, though... Wow, that is just dead wrong, like you said. First of all, whoever messes with people smaller than themselves are just cowards. Only cowards mess with people they have advantages against. But still, that is just so mean... and rude... You're right. Little kids have rights, too. And you're also right about the downloads. Downloading times are just so annoying... This has happened to me too many times to count. When your friends get so irrational because you did something, and they won't even listen to why you did it, even if you have a good explanation. And plus, I don't believe in best friends, either, but for different reasons. I just don't like favouring people. It doesn't seem right. Then they get mad at you AGAIN, and become all irrational... Don't teenage girls have this sort of dream all the time? It's cute, I guess. We all have that person that we just love, and we dream about them, but somewhere in the dream, reality kicks in... Plus, there's that time in life where we're arguing with best friends, and you despise ANYthing that has ANYthing to do with them, and it's sorta annoying, but it happens. While at the same time, you wish it wasn't happening, but you force it on, anyway. ... Anyway, so some of your entries are pretty interesting, while the majority of them are short and day-to-day. I don't know exactly... but... (20/50) Grammar: Well, some words are spelled correctly, plus the occasional little typo error, but you use a lot of slang and shortcuts. With me, this isn't a problem, but other people can't figure out what those words mean. I have no problem with Ebonics, but most people do, so I think you can improve in this. Fo shizzle. (4/10) Glitter: 4 extras! 101 things, cast, rings, and "CCismz." Cute. Love those pages, too. (5/15) Extra Credit: Well, you've got those extra pages, so I think... (1/5) Lasting Impression: Probably because of your beatiful username, but for the entries, probably not. (2/10) Will I Come Back?: Chances are no. Sorry. (2/10) Total: 77/160 Number of Entries Read: All of them, but some I skimmed through. Favorite Entry: This one. Favorite Quote: No full quotes are that appealing to me, but I like your phrase, "AOHell". Comments: I'm SO sorry it took me SO long to do this review. Sorry to YOU and all the people at RougeReviews who are AFTER you. Wow, this is all my fault. Good job, though! Reviewed by: Aless
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