Username: I think it's pretty easy to remember and in general I like pink. Demin I'm not too sure about though. (4/5)

Title: It's kind of long, but it's a sweet message and endearing. I think it goes well with the layout as well. (5/5)

First Sight: It's pretty interesting; I haven't really seen one quite in this format before which is cool. I really like how there are three boxes placed so neatly in those positions. It just looks really clean, but it kind of seemed like th font didn't match the overall look. The picture is cute and although there's green in it, it seems that the green scroll bar is too bright against the blue background. Otherwise, looks decent. (8/10)

Your Sacrifice: Consistently everyday almost, and some multiples. A skip here and there. (7/8)

Sparkling Diamond: It's a huge difference from when I first saw your diary, and I like it. It's something you made yourself, therefore means more and I'm impressed by this. It seems that you just learned how to do HTML and can come with something really nice. Like I said, I love the way it's set up with all the tables in the perfect places and size because it just looks really neat and well organized. It's easy to find everything, and I like how you've used scroll bar for the entry, but I the other green one doesn't seem neccessary. The picture is well chosen, because it's Kitty on the hill and I like how there's a blue ball surrounding her, and the clouds, trees around. Plus your links, background match the blue in the picture is nice and you've linked where you got the image right under layout credit. I just don't really like the font chosen. (22/25)

Guestbook: Whoa, cool you have that same picture you used for the diary. And the background is cute, but it kind of obscures the actual words when the entries come along. Still nice though. (3/2)

Readability: I found this to be fine. (5/5)

The Love: As usual, the first entry didn't pull me in. They're usually not great so don't worry. A couple of spelling errors, too many of these "..." And you just mentioned a couple of things going on, making me want to know more. You don't write long paragraphs at all, most of them are one or two sentences. It's just not too interesting. You do the same thing when you "describe" your friends in the Cast. There's nothing much to go by. It doesn't give us a picture of the people at all. Also it seems you write on what you're doing for the diary sometimes and they're just updates on diary-related stuff. It's fine if you're excited about all this and trying out new things like HTML and the like, but try to show that in your writing, instead of just putting it on the entry and making it dry. I mean you have done a great job with this layout, but your diary should also include what you've been doing, some opinion, feelings, dig deeper so we can see the real you. It just gets boring to always read about what you're doing online and/or something that takes two seconds to explain.

Hmm, in this one even though it wasn't a good first day, you actually describe it in a detailed manner which made me read more carefully because that's when I found you gave a little more. I'm not sure I understand what "Form" class is supposed to be, but that's okay. Oh good you gave us a key of what the abbreviations mean. Wait a second, you "burnt your mouth on chips"? It would've been nice to know how that came about. I just can't imagine it. And this was sweet about Kelly, your guardian angel. And, ooh this opinion piece should be good. I always like reading through different viewpoints. I have heard this many times [tweens shouldn't be reviewers or something.] Yea I've always thought that was kind of ridiculous. Well, you didn't get too into it but at least you got some thoughts across. Yea, this was good too. I can totally agree with you about believing in Jesus in a certain way, but at the same time, I'm respectful of those who "base their lives around Him." That is their right and I would never want to disregard that. The two different opinion entries I've read so far are a good start, but they don't get too in depth. It still seems short and more surface level. I know you're trying though.

Wow, I'm already done with reading the whole diary? To be honest, I don't feel I've learned much of anything about you... (15/50)

Grammar: Some misspelled words, a few mistakes but not too many. (7/10)

Glitter: Links to review sites, 50 facts about you, bio, cast abc's, some chapters to your story. Where are the direct links to the reviews that are done? (8/15)

Extra Credit: Three for self design. (3/5)

Lasting Impression: I doubt it. (1/10)

Will I Come Back?: Nope. There's just nothing there to make me want to. (0/10)

Total: 88/160

Number of Entries Read: You haven't had your diary for too long, so I read all 43 entries.

Favorite Entry: I don't really have one.

Favorite Quote: Same as above.

Comments: Please don't feel disheartened by this review. You're starting to get better, but it's not enough yet. Still if you want to keep the writing the way it is, that's fine too.