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Username: I've always liked the sound of this username. I mean, it's prowling-leo. How cool is that? (5/5) Title: Well, I guess it goes with the picture you use for your layout. (4/5) First Sight: I don't love the image or the person, but the color and font used for your site URL is beautiful, but kind of blends in with the picture so at first I missed it. (7/10) Your Sacrifice: Archived and everyday. (8/8) Sparkling Diamond: Okay, the picture isn't that bad and he does look very relaxed on that soft bed of his. I would make the prowlingleo.diaryland.com part larger, more prominent. You have four drop down menus for your navigation but it's actually still easy to find things because you've named them appropriately. I don't care for dropdown menus though especially because each time I scroll, if one thing is clicked, it will move to the next and I hate that. It's soo annoying. But anyway, I can still find things easily. I think the visitor's thing is really big though ... (19/25) Guestbook: Aww, I actually like this.. better than the diary layout. The way he was framed looks good. Plus your friend made a gorgeous teardrop, with wolf and golden sparkles inside. Wow! I'm giving you extra points for this, especially because you made the guestbook (based on Blue-Swirl design.) (7/2) Readability: Yes the font's great, easy on the eyes. (5/5) The Love: This is what came after all the extras and I was extremely happy to see a real entry. It's good how you have all your extras in the beginning though. You've written this so beautifully and I know I've felt this way before too, but you've stated it so eloquently. Meeting people from Diaryland-- wow, that's cool though. You have so many questions and it's interesting to read, to get into your head somewhat. Of course I don't know you personally, but in this entry you've put a part of you out there for everyone to see and it's wonderful. I loved your little sentence: "I don't even know me." Isn't that the truth for many of us? I was looking forward to read about your meeting with other D.lander's, especially after all your thoughts, contemplations, etc. Ahh, it wasn't a very long entry (link). I expected much more. You just wrote about what they were like, but nothing deep. After all you wrote about it before meeting them, I thought there'd be a big entry. Wow, I was sorry to read this because it was sad and accusatory, but the second part was much better, directed to the people you love. Yay, I was very happy to read the next entry and it's wonderful you're writing for yourself and no other. That's the way it should be for everyone. And it's good you've learned something from the whole thing. Your writing is so expressive, powerful and moving. You write about yourself plenty, your feelings and explain them well. I also love the way you describe events, and feelings. There were some not so great entries like the dayloggy one but you warned us it was like that and most people have many like that, but you don't. This was a great entry. So thoughtful and well written. I'm glad you wrote that entry even though you're not sure of the direction, it's a beautiful piece of work. And wow, this was so vivid. We are lucky. Some of your entries are just recaps, talking about things you've updated, telling friends what they should do. Kind of uninteresting, then you go and write an entry that makes me rememeber why you deserve everything I said in the first paragraph. You say you're not that nice of a reviewer but I beg to differ! Anyway, I just love most of your witing. You're older than most of us and it shows, you've been through a lot. And you have real talent in writing. You also know you're holding back. I'm sorry to hear you sometimes feel it's a duty or obligation to write instead of something for yourself. I know the feeling though. Oh, cool I've seen many of the banners you've made for your diaries. You're lucky you have gold or super-gold for all of them! And I truly admire that you have so many different diaries. Some great ideas. Good job on telling this story that really happened and such cute pictures of Tyler! (49/50) Grammar: people that.. and then writing "That list me.." Also, A handful of people that... Again, People that... And adults that... Okay, I think there are enough examples now. But other than the same mistake repeated, it's great. (9/10) Glitter: A bunch of other diaries you have, rings, extras/links, 8 things in About you.. Just a ton of them. (15/15) Extra Credit: Three for designing own layout, one for letting me review her and one for making extras, rings so neat. (5/5) Lasting Impression: Yes, I'll remember it easily. (10/10) Will I Come Back?: I don't know if I can because you have it locked and might change the password, but if I could, I might. (7/10) Total: 150/160 Number of Entries Read: I don't know exactly how many, but all of them! Favorite Entry: This and this was beautiful. Also liked this one and this. All the sweet, sappy ones. Favorite Quote: For me rain always brought on new things. As if the rain washed away all the bad things, all the dirty things. It was always beautiful to watch, listen to, feel. Thunderstorms are great too. Just like rain brings some kind of inner peace, thunderstorms release the inner anger. Watching the lightning dance across the sky, feeling the rumble of thunder underneath your feet. Comments: Well, I read your entire survey and signed the comments thing there. Hope you see it. =) Thanks for letting me review your diary still and you will be placed in the Fame page! Reviewed by: Kathy
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