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Username: I love the sound of it. Mist is just a beautiful word and having tropical with it gives it a sultry feeling, which goes along with the image on your layout. (5/5) Title: It's pretty good. But not the best. (4/5) First Sight: Wow, what a picture and I love how things are organized. (10/10) Your Sacrifice: You're doing great even though you've only had a three updates in August. I don't blame you because I'm been like that this month too. But there is a huge gap.. (6/8) Sparkling Diamond: It's beautiful. The photo is gorgeous.. I like the hair and the look she's giving us. And also the sheer white thing flowing behind her. Plus the background is wicked. I like how you have the pinkish bar for Diary / Contact / Thanks and the links for us to see under it. The pink looks really good on grey. You've given full credit to the site that made the layout and alternations too. I don't care for the last 5 usually but you made it look okay, plus you needed something to fill that space. You have linked Better than you Reviews review but when I clicked on it, it went to an error page. You might want to check that out. (24/25) Guestbook: I honestly don't like the picture but it is funny. (2/2) Readability: Wonderful. (5/5) The Love: I love your writing. I could tell by the second entry. I'm glad you were able to help her. Just wanted to point out that the link to your older diary on this entry is wrong.. I read this because you wrote in the next entry you have no will to write more. Now I see why. You've poured your soul out in the entry linked. It was all about your reflections and beautifully wrought, epsecially the second paragraph beginning with "There's just no future..." I really loved that you were so poetic in some of the paragraphs too, like I wish I was like the breeze floating across my face. A light, gentle wind caressing my heart; nurturing my broken past. Sifting through my broken memories and discarding the hurt as I close my eyes and drift along the wings of love in a world I can rise above. Lingering in the atmosphere I can sweep upon a new day feeling refreshed and new as I embark on a new beginning. The wind doesn't bring a unkind feeling as it embraces you. It's gentle and warm and enticing as you scatter pictures of your broken past, and everyday begins as bright as the sun. This writing you have in your diary captures the true essence of what you're feeling at the moment and you don't just state it, you go further and draw is in with your creative style. You commented on a friend who expresses her emotions and called it spellbinding. I have to agree with that about your writing. You described her writing so eloquently that the whole thing displayed the exquisite beauty of your words. Oh, the praises you heap on her are so delicious. Every single word you type holds depth and you know how to choose the perfect terms to convey your viewpoint on the subject. Oh my gosh, you've been through so much as evidenced here. I don't want to openly write about a lot of it because it's so private, yet you're telling us all. Well, you spared us the details of the most horrible thing but mentioned it and that was enough to make me want you to be safe, loved and respected whole-heartedly for the rest of your life. I know I haven't been through as much as you have but can at least relate to you feeling alone. It's not a fun feeling and suffocates me sometimes especially because I also feel like I don't have many friends. The entry was so deep and intense. I'm really glad you wrote this letter. Writing really can be a sort of therapy if you choose to use it that way. I was overjoyed to see this part: But you failed. You're so strong to be who you are today and get through everything but you've done it. And you should be so proud. I know you are. This entry really hit home for me because I worry all the time. I can't seem to stop but I should because it gets so pointless. I was so pleased to read about you learning more about what you can do to overcome and grow. All these steps seem to be working and you're realizing so much about you which is an incredible journey. I absolutely adore how you're so reflective, contemplative, asking rhetorical questions and the detail you put in. I'm in total awe of what you have to write. (55/50) Grammar: Composer supposed to be composure but that's just a typo I'm guessing. Otherwise, it's good. Though I did notice a bunch of squares in place of apostrophes in some entries but that's seemed to have disappeared now. (10/10) Glitter: You just have some links on the right side. Plus your poetry diary. (5/15) Extra Credit: One for all you've been through, one for overcoming, one because I like you. (3/5) Lasting Impression: Yes, yes, yes! (10/10) Will I Come Back?: Most definitely. (9/10) Total: 148/160 Number of Entries Read: I was planning to read all and I almost got there (I think) but my mom's going to kick me off in a few minutes. Sorry! Favorite Entry: Pretty much all of them. Especially the ones linked in the Love part. This is just one of them. Favorite Quote: I can't list them all! Comments: I've been looking forward to reviewing your diary all this time and I was not disappointed. I'm going to put you in the fame page [will have to do that later though] even though you're two points off [only because of lack of extras]. Reviewed by: Kathy
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