Username: I honestly loved this name right when I first saw it and I would click on it if I saw it somewhere. (5/5)

Title: The || bordering || the words definitely make it more interesting but I don't know if I like the phrase that's there. I know it goes with the layout and everything, but still. (3/5)

First Sight: OOh you have a cat in the corner too. I've been seeing more of those little cuties around. I'm not as obsessed with them as I was the first time around though. The picture's really sexy and I absolutely love the font of "Just airing my dirty laundry." It's kind of cool that the legs are set apart in front of the box of the entry with curved edges. I think I like the shoes best. But I'm not too keen on the little things on the bottom [buttons]. (8/10)

Your Sacrifice: Well you don't archive; you should try it by season. Some multiples but many many big gaps. (3/8)

Sparkling Diamond: I noticed that you made previous entry "old washing" and the next link to be titled "new muck. The first one fits, but new muck doesn't sound too enticing. I thought you want to do something like "freshly laundered" or of that type of thing. Overall I like the compact layout, but I don't think it shows a whole lot of personality. Usually I think those time things are cute, but the Hello Kitty picture looks like it's on crack or something and the little red button below is in a really small font. But like I said the big font for the words on top look good but I think you can make more noticeable space between each link. There's not a lot to say about this layout. (20/25)

Guestbook: It's just a blue template. Blue's the best color though. (1/2)

Readability: Font looks fine. I can read it easily. (5/5)

The Love: Well your first entry left much to be desired. I don't really have to link it because all it is, is one sentence and has typos, not really any punctuation either. Still I understand that you weren't thinking about reviews when you opened this diary and just wanted to see what it'd be like if you tried Diaryland out. The next entry wasn't much better even though had more words. It seems that you like to write a lot of slang and you mention a lot of your friends. Anyway, most of the beginning entries is all about what you did during the weekend or day and don't go too in depth. You describe what happens and I know you're having fun, but you don't include emotion or comment more one certain sentences that have the potential to be very strong and opening for readers to learn more about you. Also, I saw a lot of forward-type stuff [meaning added stuff that wasn't written by you and don't have a lot of personal value except to share with people which is good, but maybe you should put them all together and link that page as an extra; it was a bit annoying to have these come up time and time again.]

So really, you're using the online diary to get out what's been going on in your life as well as your friend's. At one point you put more emotion in, in a thoughts coming out of your head style which is fine, at least there's something! Most of the time, I don't really care about all the conversations and everything else. Goodness, why do people have these long-a** usernames through IM? It's bad enough to have an internet conversation, but having a long name makes it ten times worse and more annoying. Sometimes these conversations are fun as long as you reflect on it and tell us the significance of why it's put there, but usually nothing accompanies the IM chats.

Oh wow, this is pretty detailed and has some feelings portrayed. It was good to read about something else, besides parties and the like.. The real relationships and emotions is what I would like to know more about.

So I found out you're a senior. That's interesting news to me. The way you write, it just seems you're not as mature, calling people "faggot" and other such words. And also using too many cuss words, trying too hard with the slang. It just gets old. But there were some entries that weren't so bad. And all the entries with photographs on it are wonderful. Most of them were really nice and it's always good to have a visual of who you're reading about.

Yes, it is your diary and you should write about whatever you want to write about but just remember you requested this review. I know you probably won't agree with most of what I have to say but I spend my time doing this so I hope you can at least appreciate that part. You may disregard this though, because as you know it's all a matter of opinion. Anyway, I did see some entries that had emotion in with the dayloggy parts so that was nice. It seemed like you'd always close with "Voice your Op on Tagboard".. That's not necccessary so often! Anyway way, so yea you can do what you want with your diary and not change a thing if you don't care to. It's pretty darn boring for random people to start reading though. It just seems like everything is surface level, very superficial and no depth or looking beneath the surface. (17/50)

Grammar: You had some typos, some non-capitalized words, slangy type language, exclamation marks when not needed, etc. (7/10)

Glitter: All of them are javascript and come out in pop up windows. But they all don't work right now [though I had seen your extras previously] so I'll have to take points off. You've got linked, about me, joined and each one, a bunch of things. (10/15)

Extra Credit: The pictures. (1/5)

Lasting Impression: Hmm, doubt it very much. (2/10)

Will I Come Back?: Nope, even if I did have the time. (0/10)

Total: 82/160

Number of Entries Read: All 74 of them.

Favorite Entry: This one showed a lot of thought.

Favorite Quote: I would've included one, but I can't highlight anything on your page.

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