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Username: It's beautiful, romantic and easy to remember. The best kind. I would most definitely click on it. (5/5) Title: I love the thought that deep down we're all princess and I doubt you're ordinary but I like it anyway. (5/5) First Sight: Kind of baby-ish but I love the image, stars and brushes. (9/10) Your Sacrifice: You haven't archived last month, but everything else looks good. You update tons. (8/8) Sparkling Diamond: This layout is done by Texy in Hawaii and it's one I've never seen before. I love the unique-ness of it and I've always been a fan of Disney characters. Which one is your favorite? I think based on your layout picture, I would pick Belle, Sleeping Beauty, or.. Actually, all of them are too adorable. And I love how they each are holding something that's dear to them in the story. It's such a lovely image. And the brushes on all four corners look great, as well as the stars-- they're brilliant. I like how everything is boxed in and one thing I absolutely love about this layout is that it's customized because there's your username in that font and glowified. It's gorgeous! Matches so well. I think the Extra part isn't neccessary to put it all out, so maybe if you placed part of it on different page, to make that table shorter and added scroll bar on the main entry part, so that they'd be the same height, it'd look really neat. Still it looks okay without doing that. I like the background but it's kind of hard to read white words on it. There's no date or time on the entries though. Ooh, at the bottom there's your username again in that kind of style with a smaller version of the picture. Very ncie. Overall, it's such a sweet and well organized design though. (23/25) Guestbook: Same as your diary's. (3/2) Readability: The font was too small and spaced together too tightly. I had to change it to make it bigger and as I mentioned earlier, I don't like how white is on that color of pinkish purple. That's how it looks on my screen, at least. (3/5) The Love: I started with your first entry because that's what I usually do in a review. The first thing I noticed was that you spelled beginnings incorrectly. Even though you didn't write a lot in this entry, I still liked some of what you had to say. It didn't give us a lot of insight about you, but I enjoyed this part: "this life has become one I love....and here is where I tell you all why I love it." I thought that was really beautiful, and kind of shows us how you came up with your username too. I like knowing why people made a new diary and what they're thinking of using it for so it was good to read the first entry. So when you began this diary, you were starting college? That's really interesting. It'll be good to hear about your experiences, because I just started my freshman year about three weeks ago! So, you're really into Viggo aren't you. That's cool. Everyone has a sort of obsession with a famous person. I know I kind of do with one who shall remain nameless. Okay, maybe I like more than one... So far I haven't read a lot of thought, contemplation, emotion and the like. I want to know more about classes, people in your life, and the like, but I don't see a lot of that. When I find something interesting, you mention it and decide you don't really want to write about it so skip to something else that doesn't mean as much. So I was happy to find this which you titled "a long ramble that you'll probably think is silly." Maybe some people had that feeling, but I certainly did not. You poured your heart out about Mr. Rogers and it was beautiful. It's lovely to know that someone is letting you see what's inside. It's really nice that you were able to write that about him and your feelings shone. I think this is my favorite entry so far. It's just so deep and you're asking all these great questions. I love how you express yourself; it shows your heart. It was amazing. I'm sorry you felt your wirting was "craptacular" but what an interesting word. I just want to reassure that all of us, whether we're writers or not, will have not so good days in this field and it doesn't mean you'll always be like this, but just going through a dry spell at the moment or something else is behind it. It doesn't mean you're a bad writer, just maybe that you need a break and should think about things, and hopefully not worry about it too much or truly believe you're a horrible writer. We all have talent within us, it's just for different skills and such. Well the next few entries after that one emotional one were all pretty short and update on whatever you wanted to comment on. Not something I want to see for a long time. I just didn't care to hear much of Naked Viggo day and things that could've been written about more seemed to be kind of glossed over. Ohmygoodness, this was so sad and I couldn't believe it. I was outraged and extremely sad as well. I definitely agree with everything you've written in response to it. It's so disgusting isn't it. I kind of felt through much of your diary that I hadn't gotten to know you very well, just some of the surface things like you liking Viggo so much and that you're an extremely caring, opinionated person, but beyond that, I didn't see a lot of what was inner you. There were a few entries that helped me see deeper and those are the kinds I love so much because they really show who you are. But then the majority of your entries are short, don't give a whole lot and you just go on about the movie you watched, updated story, etc which doesn't make for very intriguing reads. Then after awhile, you get more into your feelings and write about how you feel on glue traps, eating, and more. And sometimes you're really good at describing things, but that's only when you spend more time on an entry. I like when you question things and begin an litany of contemplations. I know exactly which design site you're talking about in this entry. I'm sure someone has told you the link by now, but just in case you don't know, it's called Faith Designs. I like the layouts featured there as well. They're so beautiful and inspiring. Oh okay, good you found it! You're right, I did not like what you wrote about here. "All immigrants should be sent back home"?! I expected more from you. I was disappointed to read thisd entry, but I guess that's just your opinion and I can't do anything about it. Everyone has the right to believe what she or he believes. So good job on voicing what you really thought and not sugarcoating or censoring. I admire you for that. Your writing didn't dazzle me, but sometimes there was a certain quality about it that made it so wonderful and special. (40/50) Grammar: Misspellings of some words like "feint" should be faint, "begining" should be beginning, but nothing huge. Everything else looked decent. (9/10) Glitter: Imood, rings, links, reviews, cast, about, tons of quizzes but you haven't created a quiz page linked on your main layout.., bunch of other things not linked. (12/15) Extra Credit: One because I really do like the layout, two for the better entries. (3/5) Lasting Impression: Pretty good chance. (8/10) Will I Come Back?: I won't have much time to do that. But maybe someday. (4/10) Total: 132/160 Number of Entries Read: A couple of the very first ones and about 110 others. Favorite Entry: Maybe this, so profound. And I liked this one too. Favorite Quote: I'm so confused about what I want at times it makes me sick. I want....everything. I want stability, I want excitement, I want comfort, I want movement. I want privacy, I want to be noticed. I want to be no one, I want to be someone. The people I would talk to in highschool seemed to have it all figured out. Go to pharmacuetical school, become a pharmasist, join the navy, marry so and so after finishing that. They seemed to know what they wanted. And me? I want to live lifes greatest soap opera, then be the writer behind the worlds greatest book and celebrate my success secretly. I want drama, I want peace, I want love, I want happiness, I want family, I want space, I want people. I want animals and kids, I want freedom. Ugh. I want so much. But I'm going to have to settle, I know that much already. But will I be happy when I settle? Will I yearn for what I gave up for the rest of my life, or be satisfied with what I gave myself. Comments: You do sound like a charming, caring and extremely fun person to be around. =) Reviewed by: Kathy
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